18 Oct 2012

Five Sentence Fiction: Flawed

I nearly forgot that today was FSF day!

Here is my contribution :)


Tonight was THE night.

In the past she had always chickened out but tonight nothing was going to stand in her way.

He wouldn’t know what hit him she thought, as she smoothed the silk gown over her hips and carefully placed her feet into the crystal slippers, he didn’t stand a chance when she looked this good.

Entering the ballroom from the side entrance, she could see him talking to one of her ugly sisters – ugh! – this Prince was hers and she was going to show everyone.

She grabbed the nape of his neck, closed her eyes and kissed him as her stomach performed a million somersaults, she opened her eyes “Buttons!”

18 comments:

  1. Finally Buttons gets the girl. Yay!!

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  2. Very Cinderella-y...or I'm still in Disney mode!

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  3. Naughty naughty! A sweet post that exactly fits the prompt! Lovely work... :)

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  4. Nicely done, the good guy gets the girl.

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    1. Lol! That's the flaw in her plan ;) thanks for taking the time to sto by and comment

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  5. excellent take on Cinders, like it

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  6. I can see the look on her face as he turns and I bet the ugly sister laughed! Really liked this Kate!

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    1. Thanks Lisa :) I was inspired whilst she was getting dressed! Lol

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  7. Lol, dont you just hate it when a plan falls apart!

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